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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
strange

You went back and forth, not sure did you stay in the plane? Reliving a past experience from a previous site? Was the stewardess and her roommates an episode yet to come? Then back again to the pain and what was your fear?

The story seemed very dis-jointed to me and was extremely hard to follow. Hope it is clarified in the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hahaha

You lost me at "50 year old guy with a ponytail".

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22-08-23 Sorry for the extremely long hibernation. My heart attack and recovery have hit me harder than expected. To be honest, it will likely be a bit before I continue. I am struggling with meds and coherent thought at the moment. I'll do my best to continue with stories alr...

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