All Comments on 'The Dark Stone Pt. 03'

Great buildup with the sister. I can picture that hot little bouncer. And smart, having her on the pill.

And Mom's body sounds hot, too. Nice tits, and wonderful 'mom' hips.

P.S. - Where do I get one of those rocks? (mischievous grin)

I hope the story includes those two (or maybe a new story line). I like the visual of Arjun taking his mother from behind while their husband/father is close by.

Maybe the dark stone can get them started. Mrs Singh can tell Joyce how erotic doggy is!

great work so far cant wait to see where you go with this

This is one of the best mom/son stories I've read in quite a while. I love how his mom always tries to set boundaries, saying they can't go any further, only to immediately give in and do exactly the thing she said she wouldn't do. That she knows it's wrong but she can't help herself is really hot.

I also really liked the parts mentioning her wedding ring, and Sam talking about doing stuff around his father. I hope you keep those things up. It'd be awesome if she gets to the point of letting her son fuck her from behind, with his dad close by, while she dirty talks about it with her son.

The stuff about Mrs. Singh sounds promising (although the name did make me laugh, since it's the same name as an NPR newscaster). I do think there's still a lot more you can do with Sam's mom and sister before shifting focus to other characters though, so maybe it would be better as a sidestory or sequel or something?

Regardless, this is a great story and I'm looking forward to coming chapters.

I love where this is going! Five stars!

Just get the dad involved too and it'll all be copacetic.

Pick out his prey and move of from his mom and sister. Time to expand his life.

I hope you can have them venture in anal.

It would solve those pesky condom problems.

wish my sister and niece would fuck me like that. i think the dad should fuck sam in the ass while sam fucks his mom and sister , stacking them on top of each other so they can kiss each other. im soo hard right now i need a release....

Great story. Can't waitnto read more.

We all know mom's friend is coming again soon.

Hope Bes wants some more.

Can't wait this the next chapter.

Loving this story

Any chance you could post it somewhere else and post a link here or something? Lit is taking forever to put it up.

I'd be willing to pitch in, assuming you can put out work with the same quality level and frequency. Just don't expect get much from it right away, not until you've had more time to build up readers.

New chapters are on the way to literotica. There's also a new story that should drop here any day now.

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Thanks!

You go rock!

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Why is Sam's cock still a 'Penn's or 'thing's??!! While it IS a monster, you could still use a more descriptive germ, no??

So, Beka is appreciative of Sam's cock, anyway, mom acts like she is ssssoooo

'proper'....NOT!!

Way to go, with this story, Mrs Singh is next, I think (MAYBE?!)

**5** Stars...again!!