All Comments on 'The Dark Stone Pt. 05'

these stories are great:) ive been following from the beginning. the way you have broken down the family due to the stones influence is HOT. The only request is take it further? the stone, though there, has been less and less of a presence and I wonder what would happen if you explored that more? like what if he let the mom spend more time with it, would she seek him out instead of the reverse?

I really cant wait for part 6 to come out

It was already good but this chapter was the best so far, I just love what he is doing with his mom. I can't wait for the next part.

I normally post under Swifthawk, but for some reason the verification thingy isn’t working.

Anyways, like the story, but it would be great if more was found out about the rock. What is it? Where did it come from? How are the characters going to deal with it? It’s been five chapters so far and I’ve been hoping there would be more explanation by now.

Thanks for sharing, a good read thus far.

Loved reading it. 5 stars!

I'm hoping for a condom free "accident" during a dangerous time of the month. Great story!

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Thanks!

suggest that you tailor each chapter's title to the chapter instead of using the same one each time. It not only gives you more opportunities to advertise your product, but allows us who want to re-visit a favorite scene a way to find it.

I look forward to reading the rest of your story.

Good job. Thanks for sharing.

Its getting boring

oh god! it never ends!! theres a part 6,,,sam is really not a nice person and his mothrr Joyce is weak minded,,they make a good pair as written. i feel this story was way over long..

Thru chapter 5 and all I feel from Sam is an image of a little kid. He has a rock that influences people and hasn't used it. Instead it's pretty and keeps it under his mattress.

And the mother, weak yet perverted.