All Comments on 'The Darts Dodge'

by sr71plt

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Smashing

Fitting that the young man found a happier fate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

And as the man prepared him gently and sensually,

=======

_doesn't make much sense that the man would prepare him- he'd already been fucked hard that night- twice- and his ass was lubed with cum from those 2 times.

i'd say it was nice the boy had his happy ending- but it was you who gave him his horrible and tortured beginnings- so you earn nothing for that

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
usersr71plt@sr71plt
3025 Followers
Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...