All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 03'

More please

Thanks - yeah, I try to raise the temperature as we go. I like to play the fine line between sweet and sexy with down and dirty,

Check back next week around this time for chapter 4. In the meantime, don't forget to check out Pete Towers (Yep - I'm definitely a fan.)

Keep em cumming

Just curious, why are you uploading only weekly instead of more frequently, especially since you already have the chapters written? Love this story, but the wait kills me.

I fully expected Matt to go out and come back to find Mom "at it". What a pleasant twist to have Mom quite unexpectedly catch Matt self administering pleasure :) . Glad things are heating up... Wondering who will break the "touch barrier" and how soon? I am betting on Mom since it is her rule and the son has great self discipline (so far) . Nice work, ready for the next one.

First anon: I totally respect leaving as my stories are short. I get that. As a writer I've always written to the terse side. I like my erotica short and sweet. When I read Literotica stories I like them short as well, more than three pages discourage me. As my story develops it does get longer.

Second anon: I will definitely keep them coming.

Third anon: When I decided to bring the series back I did it because I wanted to give it back to the many readers who had been emailing about it, and I couldn't find another home for such a direct incest story. The other main reason for its return was to finish it. Matt, Diana and company deserve an ending, and over the years I have continued to tell the story in my head so I have a definitive ending in mind. I thought about (a.) bringing all the chapters back at once or (b.) in some staggered form. I still have at least ten chapters left to go in the story and between health and work I'm not sure how quickly I can get them out. By bringing the back stories out once a week I have about three months to not only keep ahead but finish the series. That works for me as I don't want a gap of time once the old chapters are posted and new ones come out. Honestly, if I write them quicker and get closer to the ending I might speed up the turn around. Thanks for your patience!

Hey Ironman52! Thanks for your great comment. Especially in these early chapters I wrote them as very visual episodic scenes that were playing in my head. For me the Deal is a very visual story that has become a very character driven story. When I started this chapter I had the scene of Di accidentally walking in on Matt firmly in my head and the chapter wrote itself around that scene.

Another thing I absolutely love about writing this series is all the twists and turns that are available to me - it is a blast writing this. The boundaries are just begging for stretching both on purpose and by accident.

Thanks again for all the smiles you gave me as I was reading your comment; I hope you continue to enjoy and comment in the future!

You have written your visions (as you call them) so well I think I can see them as well. Please go on.

don't bring in sex, keep it more relaxed by having say mssterbating in the open or they watch some porn. I can't find stories where sex isn't really involved right away. maybe watching her in the bathroom, stuff like that. Great story btw can't wait for more.

Thanks again for your great comment. I try to be as visual as possible but at the same time leave the characters to your imagination. I like my readers getting their own sense of what they look like. As you mentioned, I focus on the visual of the scene and go from there - it's honestly a lot more fun that way.

The Deal has a lot more story to go.

Thanks for your great comment. I let the characters guide me (of course my fetishes and desire for out and out sex have their pull I have to admit) and clearly at this point neither Matt nor Diana have any desire for out and out sex so that is not going to happen. Being so closely related they have a deep mutual respect that keeps them grounded in spite of the raging hormones this situation is inflicting on both of them - perfect territory for me to have a ton of fun as a writer,

I hope you continue to enjoy the ride,

Don't leave us hanging for too long!

I promise to submit chapter four on Wednesday which should get it up for viewing either Friday or Saturday.

Playing with the rules is a lot of fun.

This is actually turning into a decent story.

Thanks for your feedback. i hope you continue to enjoy it.

great story so far

This is really good

IT WAS NEVER A FANTASY OF MINE BUT I DID HAVE SOME AWESOME FUCK SESSIONS WITH TWO OF MY OLDEST SISTERS. HAD TO QUIT BECAUSE WITH 7 OTHER SIBLINGS THERES NO PRIVACY EVER RIGHT DOWN TO A TIMES 4 MINUTE SHOWER! lol

I think that smoldering I mentioned just burst into flames!

She needs more and so does her son.

Beautiful story, Looking forward to reading more chapters

Hey PrinceLuke - very glad you are enjoying it so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks again - LF

Hey Raviguleria: Thank you very much for your kind words. I hope you continue to enjoy the series - LF

Loved your comment. Glad you are enjoying the series. You ought to write your experiences down - they sound like they would be fun to read! Thanks again - LF

Hey arrowglass: Heh... I love your hotness meter! I hope I bring it to the melting stage! Hope you continue to enjoy the show - Thanks again - LF

Hey again Prop69. Thank you for your great comment. I'm very glad you are enjoying it. Please keep me posted of your thoughts! Happy reading and thanks again - LF

And closer.

I just wish the chapters were longer

Can't wait to get further along. I forgot how many chapters before the GOOD STUFF

I can’t wait to read more, I am married and have to read in private. I have a wild side but can’t use it except for me alone. I wish when I was younger I could have had some deal like this. I’m curious if you had any such experience? Also I love pee play. Do you write those or have any favorites?

John

The heats-a-buildin'!! And just like Kilauea, something has got to pop. I hope they do before I do. Love it. 5 stars. -bern1965(pending)

Truly good/bordering on great series. I thoroughly enjoy see the mother so secure in her body and sexuality that she can be both a mother and a sexual education instructor. Finally, I like her confidence in herself that she can show a part of her erotic, self-intimacy to her son. Definitely a 5 star series.