by BobbyZeus
Just too strange. The attempt at cleverness or originality failed miserably. Simply bad story telling.
Chapter 2 has been submitted and is pending approval. We've been writing way out of order. Chapter 3 is outlined, 4 - 6 are nearly finished.
Also, this stuff IS weird. It's supposed to be weird and WAAAAY over the top. I get it, though, its' not for everyone. Thanks for reading and commenting all the same.