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All Comments on 'The Descent of Lela Ch. 01'
by naughtyloveling
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Anonymousalmost 18 years agoFirst attempt?
I thought as a first attempt you deserve a lot of encouragement, you certainly don't need help, well done, keep it going if you can
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoA Hot Read
I cant wait to read the next part.Excellent character build up.I thought the ending was great! Keep up the great work!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoPlease add these words
to the "Encouraging" column.
I'll definitely be reading the follow-ups!
Anonymousover 13 years agoStill Waiting, For the hot second story!!
Very good first story! really got into it and then it ended. You need to continue as this has a lot of places it could go.....
spoiled_bratscheover 13 years agoNicely done!
Hope you'll decide to continue, poor Lela must be in quite a state after all this time...
SimonBrookeover 13 years agoYou dreadful tease!
What a place to leave both us and her!
Beautifully written, and very, very hot. Bravo!
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naughtyloveling@naughtylovelingI love to write. To me, the joy is in the chase, the dance, the slow patient seduction. This is all set off so well when one gets the the hard, fast, nasty bits.
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