All Comments on 'The Detour'

Impeccable writing as always, but reading a story after which the woman ends up dead always leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

but not the ending I was expecting.

I am very happy that I'm reading this story in the morning. I would be so scared to read it at night. A great story. I loved it.

Well I really liked the story...I think for this time of the year it was right on the money...as far as the errors in spelling well yeah I have been reading on this site for well over 8 years and I have yet to read a story that was void of errors like that..Keep up the great work I love all your stories so far.

... there IS a "non-erotic" category for this type of story ...