All Comments on 'The Devil To Pay Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
that's it

I could not read anymore of this, I have read some bad stories, and this is as bad as it gets, this is another example of a good writer's talents being wasted on a bad story line in my opinion this should not go any longer

iceblockiceblockabout 8 years ago
Keep Going

I get so excited when I see new stories on Your page DC. Your victims are humiliated brilliantly and I can never get enough. Please continue with this, I can imagine myself being a submissive in one of Your tales!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
chapter 3 please

Love the story. Some people don't get how submissives feel and what they'll do for the right dom. You do. Can't wait to see what Lucy does with Anne and her dad. Cannot believe that she will be satisfied with a simple butt fucking......

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