All Comments on 'The Devil To Pay Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Good as ever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The problem with this mess?

Is that you never seem to think that anyone will do anything about what befalls them. Some people even get violent, giving the circumstances. But your characters just roll over. Unrealistic to say the least.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
im glad you are back

im a fan of your stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loving this series

Can't wait to see where she takes her subs too and how humiliating and degrading of tasks she will make them do. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Really great

Awesome and enjoyable, head shaving humliation of the white women is a nice touch. Now for some piercings? :) thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story so for

I like the story and would love to read more maybe more markings a tattoo on them all and more and don't forget one more sister plus daddy could get shots to give him more to fill the bra!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please more!

Need to know how the family will end up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Need to know

Love the story, need to know what happens

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More!

We need to see what happens next to the family

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very nice story

Very nice i would love to read more and i would like the other sister in it also and more humiliation to them all more outside and more things in front of others now she can use them to play with the football players are other school groups and party's!

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