All Comments on 'The Djinn Pt. 03'

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WanderingLost42WanderingLost42over 8 years ago
Well done

Futa, dick growth, the prostate induced orgasm from the birth... I hope you write more stories with similar magics and themes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That was just plain

weird.

Valyn76Valyn76over 8 years ago
The Phone is for You

Seems like you just phoned in the ending. Rather disheartening as the rest of the story was pretty good.

Well, here is to hoping your next story is better, and has an ending worthy of the rest of it.

silent_one__silent_one__over 8 years agoAuthor
Feedback

Hey Folks,

I appreciate the feedback and any/all constructive criticism. In all honesty, I do read all of the comments, I just don't comment (hence the username). Truth be told, I don't write that much simply because it is difficult to find the time, so any feedback is always appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So Hot

I fucking loved it! You should write more futa on mpreg stories!!!!! I'd commission you!

LeeIIILeeIIIabout 8 years ago
great story

Great story hope you write more looking forward to reading them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
absolutely loved the series

What a great little series you had here.

I would love to read more from you.

I would love to read a new series about his daughter and him as she truly becomes the woman he will love for the rest of his life?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

i absolutely loved this series. I really hope you write another one with the grown up daughter and her daddy, now that would be another fun read

KidpensKidpens10 months ago

Meh ending for a pretty good story

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Could have left it where Ethan kept the breasts and they grew to a c cup.

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