All Comments on 'The Doctor is In Ch. 07'

Once again, Sally clearly conveys her desires: voyeuristic, exhibitionistic, and domination of her sometimes-arrogant older brother.

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Sally also expresses her feeling of insecurity over the smallness of her titties, a rare admission in erotica. Perhaps someone should have told her that smaller titties tend to be more sensitive than big ones. That can be a great consolation.

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At the end of the chapter, she gets a thrill when Ted pinches one of her nipples. That had me wondering if she has that mysterious tit-to-clit connection, as some women do — a connection whereby nipple stimulation during arousal evokes a surprising tingling between the legs, as if each nipple were wired to her sensitive little clitty.

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But mostly, Sally expresses an assertive sexuality.

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<i>Finally, just as I'd done so many times in my dream, I reached down to my coochie</i> [cute term!] <i>, placed my hands on either side of my labia and spread myself open, giving my brother a perfect view of my inner lips, clitoris and my vagina. </i>

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With a combination of embarrassment and excitement, she imagines the effect she is having on Ted.<br />

<i>I could feel the way my natural wetness had completely saturated me down there, and I knew Ted could see it, too. He'd have to know I was aroused and excited, as wet as I was, and as I stood there exposing my pink womanhood to him, I could barely keep myself from dipping one of my fingers into my hole and masturbating in front of him. </i>

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But her reluctance doesn't last long before she dramatically displays her steamy, private, female parts.

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<i>. . . he saw me put my foot up on the mattress, opening my crotch up to a perfectly, wide open view of my pussy directly in front of him. . . . and no more than ten seconds later, I was spreading my outer lips with my left hand as I masturbated myself with my right hand . . . no more than a foot away from Ted's face. </i>

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Sally goes even further, showing off and satisfying the hunger of her drooling nether mouth somewhat.

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<i>And then before I knew it, I was leaning forward, holding my lips apart so Ted could see, and repeatedly thrusting my fingers deeply into my coochie. It felt divine. . . </i>

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Not surprisingly, her climax soon follows.

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This is really hot. More women ought to do this to express their sexuality and arouse their men. And more men should insist on their women displaying themselves erotically and jilling themselves off before them. If one’s woman can't be coaxed, then a spanking can be a great motivator.

Dear Nurse Sally, this chapter of your wonderful story is vivid beyond belief. I normally don't make comments (I usually vote), but I felt like I had to this time. Chapter 7 is incredibly hot. The descriptions, although it's all fiction, are so vivid and so well explained, I felt like I was there watching you masturbate and listening to your thoughts at the same time. Thank you for this chapter and for your story.

Your series has kept me hard - don't stop writing

this whole series is fabulous.

we can only hope that our favorite nurse will continue to delight us with more of this fabulous story.

what a treat!

OUTSTANDING!

you go girl!

What brother would not want to have that exact thing happen to him, a foot away from his sister's moist goodness while she brings herself over the edge. That's one thing I'd never ever forget! Very erotically written as always. I love how you balance the actual storyline with what is going through your mind. That is hard to pull off sometimes.

What a story - really great. And with enough threads that I think you could make proper erotic novel out of it. Please keep going - I'm still drivelling about the upcoming? (only a little pun intended) gyno scene. Not to mention the panties, and the spanking, and, and, and then with her brother! You must be a wicked person of the best sort. And to be just a little bit objective, its has already been said, but you mix the thoughts, dialogue and description really well. Damn it, you can write! R.

Good God, what a story!

This story was so hot I was hard and cumming again and again.

The panties, the open exposure, nasty, hot.

Please keep writing !!

Please keep writing! The exam with Shannon, the spanking club, this needs to continue!

As I started reading this series I was really looking forward to the Dr and patient part of the story. But you have mesmerized me with the brother and sister aspect. What you have written is incredibly exciting. I am still looking forward to the Dr part of the story but you have really caught my attention with your "hot" writing. Please - please continue!

Where have you gone....????? Oh please continue this story....Gawd its amazing. Oh yeah did I mention HOT!!! I love your writing...thanks

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS...CONTINUE!!!!!!! I BEG YOU...

I love panty stories, and stories with a medical theme. When you find them combined in a series, especially one as great and hot as this series, you read them over and over. I want you to know that your writing is very erotic and you touch on many of my personal fantasies. Thanks for adding some spice to my evening reading.

Very well written. To be honest, I had a little problem with the sister/brother thing, so I pretended Ted was a half-brother. Seven chapters and we're still not to the main objective of Ted pretending to be an OB doctor. I'll be waiting.

Wow this story is hot and please continue it. What happened between you and your brother and what about the exam. I'll be waiting to read the rest.

Please please please continue this story. So well written and very hot!

Incredibly HOT, yet tender, compassionate. Sexy as HELL!!! The mixed thoughts/feelings of humiliation + excitement. Incredible! Please keep writing!

i like the way he was treating for her sisters panties. i'm doing the same thing...he is the luckiest brother in this world. wish i had a sister like this....

please continue writing & i can't wait until ted sniffing shanon's worn wet panties..

Ok, firstly, I have to say english isn't my first language, so sorry in advance for any sort of grammar/spelling mistakes... Then, let me begin: I have an incest-relationship with my younger sister, 2 years my junior, but our circumstances are definitely different: I don't know how to properly explain, we (both my sister and I) read all your stories after looking around the web for incest-related relationships we can relate to (I translate them for my sis) and sorry, I (we, particulary my sister) have to say that what you (as you the sister, not you and your brother) are doing is wrong. Because you're not equals. You are exploiting your brother's mental issues regarding you. You are abusing him. I had no intentions of writing anything initially, but my sister, which ended up way more angrier than me, ended up begging (no really begging, she asked me repatedly, and she ended up convincing me) me to write you something about true love between a couple, and that's EQUALITY.

You may think you're treating your brother like your equal, but you aren't. You are using his weaknesses against him, and my sister even thinks you are doing it beacause you just want to dominate a man. A random man would be okay, you got your chance with your big brother, and you settled for him. You should come clear with him, saying you're like that, or you'll never feel good about yourself, you're gonna regret it later. Still, be a "mistress" to a mental unstable man isn't really that fair, but at least you'll come clean. Long story short, my sister thinks you're just a witch (not as you have strange powers, more like you're really evil) who likes to exploit and make his brother feel bad, but I think you can just be kinky as you want with your brother, maintaining your domineering relationship, but you have to tell him of this domination. Literally, "I'm your mistress, and you're my sub." Nothing more, sorry again for mistakes, Peace.

Love to hear the rest.... Such good writing tho!

You did it, you nailed me, one of my fantasies lived out through your story. Actually both parts. You see I am a panty wearing guy / exhibitionist / who would love for this to happen to me. to be exposed and humiliated in just my panties. But also, in my fantasies I'm in the role of the woman too. The one that teases, humiliates, and rewards the guy. But you have to finish. I have to know what happens. And what about Shannon's fantasy? Will ted play doctor? will Shannon get her fantasy? Will Sally join in? With ted? With Shannon? Come on there too much to leave hanging here. Please finish, Please? or at least give me permission to finish it for you. I promise you you'll love it. Please let me finish? I know I can write the ending to this story. My E-Mail is dw5062@yahoo.com I hope to here from you soon :-) thankyou for an awesome story.

Oh the emotional turmoil... You have captured it in a way no one else could. As a crossdresser you became submissive to his younger sister, all I can say is "Wow!" Nicely done.

Great story - loved the whole thing. You have a talent. You should pursue it!

Loved this stayed hard the whole time and tried to time my cum to the end.

Hot! Hot! Hot!

Great story.....

...but what about Shannon?

You have pushed my erotic buttons...medical, panty fetish, power dynamics, discipline, oral, masturbation.....

Would love to have you fill us in about Shannon and Ted and you!

He should hit the sister for that shit. Seriously she should feel like crap and he should demand to get even. Like get her to trick the other girl then hit her hard. Then kick the sister and fuck her. She deserves to hurt for what she did.

still waiting for Ted becoming a Doctor, otherwise a great story

Next please

You left us hanging, again!