All Comments on 'The Doe-Eyed Waif'

But it was a wonderful dream!

Terrific story. I'd love to read more.

I don't know who I love more David or Jessica. He is such a gentleman. I love anal stories. This one rates in the top 5 of any I've ever read. I hope to read more from this writer.

This was one of the best ever. Loving tenderness and great kinky anal sex. I will have trouble waiting for the rest of the story.

Would have been kind of him to loan her a shaver whilst in the shower to clean up all of her bits. Of course he would need to finish the job in the rear as she held in the enema. Wonderful astoundingly good story.

Amazing story! I loved it a lot! 5-stars! More, please!

A great read. And reread.

a good story and a very good storyteller

5* but the anal angle didn't do it for me. at least he had a normal sized dick.

I liked it. A good read and well written The Olympia angle was interesting as I'm from there..

I have been reading stories on Literotica for years now, and this is one of the Very Best! Extremely well written, it reads like an actual short story or novel; just one that's Unbelievably Hot! ***WELL DONE!***

Great story - well-told, HOT and ... just outstanding! thanks!

One of the best if not the best this season. Write another.

Thank you

Excellent! Do write a follow-on story/chapter....... She breaks up with her current boy friend, and returns to more anal loving with her rescuer!

One cant always picture the girl in the story,but this waif will always be imbedd

ed in my mind. Absolute passion without sleeze. please continue the story ,I will wait for more waif.my vote for the best story yet,

Beautifully presented, equal parts passionately hot and intensely surreal.

I might be a little biased since your Waif could almost be the spitting image of the lovely girl I'm infatuated with, but this was one of the absolute best things I've read in a while. Sexy as hell, intimate, and like a reminder back to when sex was a little scary, naughty, exciting and just starting to leave taboo. Wonderful!

Just that, outstanding. One of the best ever. Keep writing.

I lost my butt cherry to an older man and I thought this story was super hot… especially the description of him cumming in her ass! Thanks for your writing!

Well written and outstanding. You deserve a standing ovation.

Great story and amazing writing; I could hardly control myself...

What a great story! And the writing superb, and thanks for not using all those cliches for "sexual parts." Either you have an amazing imagination, or you are the most sensual, sexual man ever. What a gift!

You write beautifully. I was spellbound, and I'll admit that I'm usually pretty hard to please so thank you x

I am thoroughly impressed. Great story. Just enough character development and plausible story line to not be offensively benign. I enjoy the fact that both characters built up to the sex, instead of just saying 'hi,' and jumping each other's bones. Although like many stories on here, I did come across a couple of typis and misspellings (fear not, I'm not a grammar nazi! Lol). Also, I think you should have gone deeper into why she was thrown out of her Mom's house (as in ocwnt as she tried to come off...she was a lot more sexually literate to be 'innocent'). Maybe she was molested at home by her Mom's boyfriend, or perhaps she got caught, or whatever. Either way I enjoyed reading your story and look forward to reading more in the future.

Well written and not very cringey...just riding along the spines of "could happen" not trying to fall off...overall it's a very well written piece :D

Everything I love-that little squirt of her ambrosia as she climaxes when I'm going down on her-have found at least one orgasm if I'm going to bugger her relaxes her muscles-and love missionary when I'm rogering her rump, so I can see her face when she climaxes again, hopefully/usually more than once...you painted a very nice picture of her as a real sweetie-5 and a fave

S U P E R B !!

Helluva great story! An absolute 5-star!

Perfect, well done