All Comments on 'The Doll Collector Ch. 02'

I mean the way they say, "Oh she's lovely..." Yes, IT is cute isn't it?

Creepy, I love it!

Please continue...will faithfully follow...easily one of the best stories I've ever seen. Eagerly awaiting the next one!!! Torturous waiting

I am curious if Jaques did plan everything because unlike the other 'dolls', Jillian did come from a normal life where people would look for her if they believed her to be missing. This is as creepy as hell, but I am really enjoying this for some reason hehe.

Or something close to it. Look at the people who have kidnapped teenagers for decades or even their own daughters and no one has really noticed.

This is why this story is so good....and so much more scary than cannablistic aliens.

Ellie,

You said before that you were partly done with chapter 3. How is it coming? Your stories are all interesting. I would really like to see how this one ends.

i love your style :-) can't wait for more and me being a romantic i'm really hoping that when she is found that maybe she says she's there of her own free will but that just might be a fantasy of mine lol keep up the good work can't wait to read more

Hey when can we expect the eagerly anticipated Ch.03?

I was about halfway through the third chapter when i realized i needed to finish one for the summer contest so it is not finished as yet. I also owe a chapter to Bella and and 3/4's through that so it will take longer than the week between the first two chapters. I understand you are all eager for me to complete series but if you think of it in terms of a cliff hanger as most TV shows leave you with I don't make you wait a whole yer for the next installments lol.

I wish i could write faster and didn't need to go through the editing process but its a must or rather than asking for more you would all be pelting my work with rotten tomotoes and less pleasant remarks. Thank you to those who wait with patience and understanding that i must also do a job i get paid for and live y life with some fun.

To those less patient all I can do is apologise and hope you pop back from time to time and see how many updates there are.I do fully intend to finish them all but this year my commitments in writing are spread out by the Survivor challenge.

Happy reading

~ellie

Creepy but super enjoyable.

Micheal Jackson's Neverland security setup, Hannibal Lector's conversion of Clarice in " Silence sequel, a smattering of ' The Collector by John Fowles & a relatively obscure true life captivity saga called ' Perfect Victim ' .

I'm not sure if any any of these were influences but this is awesome no matter the inspiration. Kudos on creating the multiple characters that are threatening to become more interesting then Jilliana herself.

I liked the story and the murky nature of the antagonist. It ends on a note of futility, which I think is appropriate given the tone of the writing till then. It had a sexualized "Tales of the Crypt" feel to it.

Keep writing. You know I like your work.

I find myself still stopping by your page every now and then hoping for a Ch.3. Please consider writing one Ellie!

Please add more it is a brilliant but scary tale!

More please. :)

Still no Ch.03 :(

I really love this story! I'm more of a non-con reader, but this story has my attention. I love the doll complex and the Doctor especially. I also like that he(Jaques) Isn't "irresistible, tall dark and handsome" It makes you feel more for him "He is not the monster you think he is, spoilt selfish young women who will not return his calls are the monsters." best line, And the staff's loyalty is also really interesting, please continue!!!!

More please!

Like all of your other fans I'm hoping you'll write more on this story

and I still check regularly to see if you'll continue it :)

The next chapter in this series has been submitted to literotica, Hopefully it will be out in a few days.