All Comments on 'The doll house'

by Charles Petersunn

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rissa200204rissa200204almost 13 years ago
delightfully naughty

i think he will be very much happier where he ended up lol!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
very different style...and most entertaining!!

Thanks Charles!!

Highly amusing....well-written descent into the doll world.... did he have children in there?? Did the dolls miss the new clothes and trinkets he used to bring?? I wonder if Laura ever found two female dolls had been put together with lucky Mr. Widdams?? LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
great story :-)

as a guy who is also a doll owner .. I found this to be a great story ... thank you for it :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
incredibly imaginative

Bravo! 5 stars for a well written and unusual story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
good job

Great job on the story and i saw the episode you talked about it was good.

ladiesofcharityladiesofcharityalmost 13 years ago
A wonderful read :)

Thoroughly enjoyable, could be the beginning of a series as Milton gains confidence. Thanks

resapooresapooalmost 13 years ago
have you seen my stapler

i couldnt even finish reading the story because I kept picturing Milton from office space. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very imaginative and enjoyable.

Used to watch The Zone all the time as a kid. Missed that episode, though. Good ending to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

I know you may not have set it up as a series, but it would be a fantastic one. Please at least one more chapter.

Purveyor_of_SinPurveyor_of_Sinover 12 years ago
They're not dolls!

They're action figures!

Very enjoyable tale. The characters were fun, and the scenes with the girls quite arousing. Excellent story!

EdrickEdrickalmost 12 years ago
WOW

Just wanted to say that this was a really good story, Keep up the good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Beautiful!

Excellent story, very well-written. The sex was nicely balanced with the rest of the plot, and your technical skills are praiseworthy.

Do keep writing, even if it's not about Milton.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Appealling story

What a lovely gentle fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great

Really interesting story, I remember the Twighlight zone and this was a good rendition. I will try to read more of your stories, cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Urges to continue the storytelling in a 1950's suburban bungalow, a mansion, a Barbie Dream House, a log cabin, a Louisiana shotgun, a country cottage, a southern plantation, a western ranch, a hillbilly shack.

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