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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Thanks for the awesome stories I've read all of yours here I think I will check out Amazon now:)

MagicwrtrMagicwrtrover 8 years agoAuthor
Berig/Derig/Blah

Looks like I name changed halfway through the story on Sir Derig, I'll try and get that updated if I can figure out how.

masterhobbesmasterhobbesover 8 years ago
Wonderful

Love your work, I've already read everything you've written on liteoritca can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Another Excellent tale

I would enjoy more in this story, the two of them seem interesting and the adventures they get into could be wild and wide ranging.

Ramjet

trashmantxtrashmantxover 8 years ago
out of context

"He knew it would be a minefield to win Lara's heart,"

How would he even know what a minefield was? Sorry just nit picking.

Loved the story 5*

sithonsithonover 8 years ago
5 stars very good.

There was no mention of male dragons. So in this universe all dragons are the progeny of a human male and a female dragon? Interesting. As to the anachronism of the minefield , this is a world of magic , who's to say they don't have magic tripped mines? The queen set explosive traps for the dragonslayers ,you could call those mines.

iknowwhatiknowwhatover 8 years ago

Loved the sappy sending. This story was awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Loved it but honestly wanted more "action" ;)

hellinahelmethellinahelmetover 7 years ago
This is why I love Fantasy!

First story of yours I´ve read...good knights in shining armor, chivalry and compassion story, will continue to read the others you have and will now go to your bio to see who your are, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
NAME CHANGE

You switched from Derig to Berig hallway through. Just FYI lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
When's the next story? ;-)

When's the next story? ;-) -JK

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A good story. You might add another chapter (or two) about Stephanie and what becomes of her. She cann't just disappear from the castle/keep.

Just a thought.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Well done, chivalry is certainly not lost, especially here.🤩🌹

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