All Comments on 'The Dream House'

by Victoriajohn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
VERY hot1

VERY HOT! Very hot indeed. Would be nice if there was a sequel gangbang. Wouldn't mind if the men were a little rougher. BRAVO!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A god pice of writing

I loved this story! I was one of the best I have read. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
The Dream House

Anther fantastic story from a fantastic author. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great job

Greate work. Pls. keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good job

good job, i love all your stories, very great author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
super

great story. it needs another section to tell about all the work that they did in her garden

mitu_doshi_2000mitu_doshi_2000over 14 years ago
It made so wet!!!

Oh Gawd...i loved the part about the 'hide-n-seek'...it was so teasing and erotic....and also the part when she says "hide me from the others"....i came instantly to that. I wish she was made naked more slowly...and add a bit of shyness and embarrassment into the girl....loved the thrill this story had given me. Now i don't think i can stop myself from imagining in the same situation, everytime i see construction workers.

gr8pgr8pover 11 years ago
Dripping

I love this story. I gets me soo hot..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More!.

Love this story and yes let's hear more of the builders, this story is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thank You

Once again thank you for a very sexy story ~ you really have me going tonight read the vicars wife stories already and now this one I suppose one more before bed.

Sarah Jane

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

Fantastic story i have really enjoyed it much more than any other,keep up the good work.

TurboT81TurboT81over 5 years ago
Great read

Loved this story, looking forward to reading some of your others.

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