by Armphid
Sexy, hot and sweet.
Dendra being what she is but also aware of the times and being modern was neat.
I've been reading stories on this site for years and this is the first time I've felt moved enough to comment. Very well written, romantic as well as erotic.
I am sorry I did not read this for the contest, I don't usually
read nonhuman category. Very well written and deserving of the win. Your writing flowed from one scene to the next carrying the reader along. The sex scenes were descriptive but not vulgar. Thank you for the story.
Loved your second sentence. Really. Probably the best sentence I've encountered on this site. As for the rest of the story, I still have to read it. But now I'll do so with heightened anticipation.
I guess it was written as a stand alone story and maybe the mystique of it would be lost with a sequel but please please try. Like the comment below me, I dont usually read the non-human but I loved this.
I'm sorry I didn't read this during the contest. I wish I had and am glad you won.
Your story was beautiful and touching. Thank you.
An excellently crafted story that updates the Druid (?) business of rebirth. She's a little to hip for my classical taste in aliens, but you're forgiven for the modern style of interpreting old times.
Thank you so freaking much for this story. Please write more. Make it into a series. Id really like to read more about their future together.
and since this was for earth day, maybe you could make the characters adopt a naturist/nudist lifestyle when he owns the farm/land and maybe she could change into a real human and age along with him in life (kinda like how pinocchio change into a real boy) or something like that. its just an idea of the direction on the story that you could take this.
Thank you for the story and PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE MORE.
Like the other comment there, I've been reading on this site for a long time, but this is the first time I've ever HAD to leave a comment before moving on. Great story! I'll be left to Pine for another one until you write again. Not even necessarily the same story. It's just that if you can write like that, keep it up! Thanks for the great read.
This story was just amazing. I don't normally read these kinds of stories but man am I happy I read this one. keep up the amazing work.
Creative and beautifully written, a great read.
Beautifully written and structured. A pleasure to read and attention grabbing as well.
Have only landed here when led by Nifty authors I admire. Thanks for the tale and your help with Audette's remembered authors.
A most amazing story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it. And, please, let the story continue into the next chapter.
And any other words I could add would be iterations of the same, and thus inconsequential. What is of consequence is how enthralling this story is, on every level. May you continue to write such wondrous works, and seek out the beauty in the world around you.
can we have more? How do the tree and the dryad continue the relationship?
-What about dealing with (gasp!!) pollution, particularly of farmland & forests?
This was great stuff. I absolutely adored it. I can't wait for them to get together on a more permanent basis. :)
I enjoyed this story immensely!! It was as if i were an invisible spectator. I think I'm just about as wet as Dendra was but alas, no Don to relieve me... I will continue to read your stories Armphid, keep up the great work!! :-*
I 've never been so wonderfully satisfied by another tale on this site in 10 plus years of readings; My Xylem & Phloem channels over flow with sweet sappy thanks my friend. Which make me want to go out nurture, caress, Plow Deeply, Seed, water, fertilize & cum together with my gardens and world.
You write a tale which is a wonderfully erotically, and spiritually, uplifting tale.
This was is most definitely a winner.
I would love to read a sequel if you plan to make one :)
I think your dread is excellent. I hope Don has a strong heart 🎃. Lyn
A lovely mix of sweet, hot, naughty fun! Looking forward to more 😉
I agree with roadrunner, I to would like to see a sequel to this amazing story of nature, myths, romance, and sex. I haven't read a story like this before but found it very enjoyable reading. Maybe they get together again after he finishs college and he comes back to help his uncles run the farm. I would like to see them fall in love and find a way for each to exsist in the other's world, human and spiritual. An exstreamly well written story with a exquisite plot and excellent character development. Oh, by the way, I gave you 5-STARS.
I really enjoyed the story. I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. Thanks for writing it. I hope there will be another chapter in the future.
Excellently written, the story before Don getting to the top of the hill was very informative about him and the land, and the part after getting there was actually very believable for such an encounter! Maybe have him returning to the hill with a wife/girlfriend?