by Brie_de_Jour
Such a well written and interesting story, I hope it isn’t over yet. Would love to see the duke’s Reaction or have her meet the Highwaymen again. Please continue writing this marvalous story!
I think I like this story the best if only for the impregnation part. I'd love to see her meet the highwayman again and for him to see that she's carrying his child. Any continuation I'd love to see really. Please keep writing.
Ok, I relent. It was originally intended to be a stand-alone piece, but I do have an idea for a second part. I currently have a few more stories in the works but I promise there will be a continuation of the tale of the duchess and her highwayman.
I read this as a standalone story and it worked. I think the readers like it so much that they want more, and who could blame them? Even though it was obvious what would happen, your writing was so good I was riveted throughout the story. It gave a nice glimpse into the travails of the aristocracy, although I imagine the peasants had it worse back then. Anyway, nicely done. Five stars from me.
Typos, and misspellings, happen. Usually the reader can just flit over them and move on, but sometimes they result in an unintended laugh. For example:
"Yet that fear was tempered by a certain degree of curios anticipation."
At a time like that, she's thinking of her curio collection? :-)
Amazing story! I've done gangbangs and this is a very accurate description, at least from my experience. Not every man is as goodlooking as in this story ofc;) but her feelings are very on point!