All Comments on 'The Duchess of Lust Ch. 02'

You are such a great writer! I normally read historical fiction and I really think you could write a real book, you should really look into it. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

I'm loving your work; you write very well. Could you please, however, consider using "smirked" a little less? I found it distracting.

I'm really enjoying the series, especially the first part. You did a great job capturing the Duchess' emotions and how she was trapped into the scandalous behavior that she secretly yearned to give herself to in spite of it.

I think you lost that a little bit in this chapter though. Maybe it was the magic getting away from you, but I didn't feel the same strong characterization in this one that made it seem natural for the Duchess to behave as she did.

I did still enjoy it of course, and will continue to look forward to and read additional chapters. Thank you for submitting it!

I like this story. More sex than story, frankly, and this is not my preference, but the story itself I like. On to the next chapter!