All Comments on 'The Easter Surprise'

What a sexy start to a lovely juicy incest romance. Lets get into it now please.

Not bad for a first story hope to see more from you . Keep writing and I'll keep reading . Good luck and thanks for the story.

nice tale but I would not of put it in her butt first. not a newbe to sex and no lube

for her. 8 1/2 in that fast hurts bad in the butt , bloody mess. In her puss it

would hurt like a B as you write it happened. put some love in your tales.

There's no way on earth someone is just going to push an erection into a virgin ass for the first time without a lot of pain, Ditto for the first time vaginal.

Oh yeah....of course it was with a 8 1/2 in cock........

Who wrote this..a teenager?

Know that her sister knows the bunny was her brother; which she might have guessed by the voice; you know she's going to bang him again and again. They hopefully, will do it at home when the parents are gone and they can make out etc. His sister may just like cum from her own experiences. Whatever the reason, her brother is hers now! Nice story and much potential. Hope the next chapters are very soon, thanks!

She blew him so it could've lubed from that

And let's him do anal and then vag. She wasn't prepared for this so chances are that butt wasn't superbly clean. And then he sticks this doo doo smeared dick in her vag? I ain't buying it... :(

She wanted to lose it quick so she fucked a stranger. You are looking way to into it if your concern is about poop on his dick. It's a story for people to fill in the blanks where they see fit.

a fat slob story who gets fucked. 6'1" at 250 is a porker. turns out it's his scum of the earth sis???

He's a fat fuck and she's a retarded slut. A match made in heaven. I hope that they produce some Downs Syndrome babies who can work in a carnival side show to support the family.

Friend of mine does the bunny helper thing each year. Id love to be the bunny and fuck her after each shift. Like he did.

Realism!!!!!!!! Please. Write something believable.

Fun quickie!

10/10!!!!!

Besides details like weight, cleanliness of the anus, the flow and intent of the characters were pretty good. And on the sister deciding to deflower herself with a stranger just makes her a crazy chick who is impulsive. There are many men and women who do impulsive things. The writing was very good....just pay attention to the details because people can catch details and bring it to your attention.