All Comments on 'The Eden Shack'

A real story, lovingly presented. I treasure this!

I'll check Moondrift somemore

I can't believe people have rated this story so high. It's barely readable. Worst "hot" story I've read in a while.

How great the mighty fall

BUT A PITY IT ENDED THE WAY IT DID........EXPECTED SOMETHING MORE ROMANTIC TO CONTINUE THE THEME....BUT ......

but I bet the husbands were cheating too....but then they discovered each others son and then their own sons to copulate with....would have been nice to know who fathered the baby and Harry to get his woman pregnant after her son did...turn and turn about but was not to be......the story then seemed to peter out and it ran out of steam...pity really as it was a good tale but then that's the realities of life for you......

loved it when the sons got to have sex with their own mothers.....a nice little twist....I just wish you would not end stories with people dying..it spoils it....much prefer to live in the fantasy world and escapism....death reminds us of the real world too much...