All Comments on 'The Elephant in the Room Ch. 01'

Mistress needs to put a cock cage on Stephen, so that Stephanie will know who is in charged.

And I agree, stephanie should be caged!

More, please.

If you're going the chastity route, it needs to be something like the Neosteel that gives a smooth female shape at the front. Can't have that clitty ruining the line of his skirts.

Lovely. Joyce

An interesting foray. Not my cup of tea but being a great fan of most of your other works, I had to check out your treatment.

While the mechanics are apparently well-developed, albeit with a distinct British leaning, the motivations, the awareness & reasoning for the needs and desires are sadly lacking in development. One only experiences the dry action-reaction and none of the human dilemmas other than mere quick asides almost as annoying fillers.

I liked it mostly. The writing is excellent. Just going into an area that’s not something I like. I loved the dom part.