All Comments on 'The Elevator'

Another fine piece of brief storytelling! Each story improves over the last and is more enjoyable. I look forward to a compilation from you in ebook form. Just start with the first one and continue through! Exceptionally written.

Why was it fatal? She didn't die, and neither did he. Or did you mean fateful???

Word have many meanings, depending on how they're used.

good story. a little preposterous but I love stories where a stranger fucks an unsuspecting cunt. well done.

Seriously. Gross. I hope he used a condom. Yuck.

This was the most inventive scenario I've read in a while, and the anonymity of the guy's coming, taking, and departure was an added bonus to the story....high marks!

And complete drivel.

Who did she call? What happened after? And what about Robert? ....... I'm so intrigued by this story