All Comments on 'The Empress' New Clothes'

Michelle -

Great to see you writing again, I loved this story. Going to have to re-read the end to see if Shelly the seat mate is the same person as Shelly the Stewardess. I don’t think they are. This is a new Category for you, and I think you nailed it!

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Very intriguing concept and start to this tale. Looking forward to the rest of the story (Thanks, Paul Harvey!) when Naomi connects with Sarah and Michelle. Until the next chapter and more about Naomi's illusion (if it is an illusion), it's definitely something to reflect on! Rated this 5 stars.

Wow, that was a great read from end to end and thoroughly enjoyable.

I like the way this story flows. I found this sentence to be very interesting. " She felt the moisture on Sarah's lips, and instinctively licked her own, concerned that they were dry" What an interesting insight into Naomi. Was she just being self conscious? Was she concerned her lips would be to rough for her friend? Or was it something else? What prompted you to add that to the story? That's quite a detail, and for me the details are what make great stories. I look forward to more.

I so enjoy your stories.. Always interesting with different twists and turns.... Can't wait to read the continuing adventures on this one,,, I wonder what the three of them get into on their girls weekend.... Great Story as always Michelle :-)

Thanks all for the kind words and ratings. I wish the people who are driving down the ratings would comment and let me know what they didn’t like.

I particularly liked the way Sarah and Naomi's friendship evolved. You've done it again!

Thanks,

-alextasy

I want to know more of such an erotic story.

I really liked this story, although it reminded me of that recurring dream where you're out in public somewhere totally naked!

Good story, just a few details about setting I'd like to note. I'm not sure if you're from the Seattle area and just left out some details, or if you arent from around there, but if you're parking at the airport at seatac, there would be no reason for the character to take a shuttle, as the terminal and airport parking are connected via an enclosed pedestrian bridge.

A smooth, beautiful dive into a magical erotic transport.

And today is Naked Saturday - for gardening, that is! Just the way to travel - would alleviate lots of problems for TSA! Well done!