by martin_x59
Oh he so deserved that being painted on him but too short!! Love this story... next please
Hmm, I just think the story is taken away from by these silly interludes. And silk clothes in the medieval ages? Anyhow, it is cute...but cute doesn't better this good tale you have going. I mean, overall,being tricked by a guy who wants to sell you as slaves is pretty realistic given the environment but...
I also think they wouldn't have taken a big wagon that isn't going to do anything but slow them down. And do they still have the map?
I'll still keep reading, but try to keep on the realistic/somewhat serious side would be my advice.
Really enjoying it so far! Huge cocks, boys and fantasy. Amazing please write more cause a love the story and even more dirty if u want to :-p Jay 21
Ignore that gay it's fantasy , you can do whatever you want with fantasy! I am really enjoying it all and hope you write more . John 19