All Comments on 'The End of Everything'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Very Good, might well have fit in "romance."

Only one minor nitpick - the _Spanish_ rulers were "Most Catholic;" the French were "Most Christian." Vive le roi!"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

That was so incredibly beautiful. The emotion that was greatly expressed showed that love, like life, is fleeting so enjoy it all by taking any chance to grab that brass ring and hold on forever.

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