All Comments on 'The Erotic Adventure of a Promotion'

what else could have been expected.

if you only once would write about a decent female character, it would be highly erotic. all your writing talent is wasted by the fucked up attitude your characters have.

your only a couple month younger than me but let me tell you our teenage years are long gone and in the meantime a lot of things changed. while we maybe discussed of not making a new life, having unprotected sex , today you are looking in a lot more serious facts, not to hurt physicly or kill somebody by having unprotected sex.

this seems not have gotten to you so far. a holiday fling was in our youth just that and not more, everything could be cured. today you still can't cure hepatitis and hiv, so I look at it pretty different than then.

If somebody want's to try to kill me , I loose all respect in just a second and I don't think it's fucking erotic.

I have no idea what planet the previous correspondent is on, but it's not mine. Mandy isn't having unprotected sex with anyone, except possibly Cliff, merely using her body to ease domestic financial difficulties. She didn't even perform oral sex, other than on Christine. If Cliff has any sense, he won't press the matter, but remain secure in the knowledge that Mandy loves him and is remaining sexually loyal to him. (I note Christine says "at least you can tell him truthfully that none of them fucked you" rather than "none of them fucked us"; did she go the extra mile?)<br>

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Good to have you back, Lady G. I look forward to reading more of this pair's adventures.<br>

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ps. I believe you meant "doddle", not "doodle".

How about a 2nd chapter -- with the girls going "further" -- so to speak.

A lot of stories on here are just porn but this is very nicely written erotica. It was a pleasure to read.

Great story more please, now that you have started the trail.

I enjoyed your story. Well written!