All Comments on 'The Ex-Niece'

A good start, hopefully more to come.

Maybe fill in the time between the first time and the end of this story.

Yet another author who doesn't know the difference between 'come' and 'cum' as to normal slang. Simple its 'cum/cumming' for semen/orgasm; using 'come' for such ends reading a story fast.

Not bad!

The niece got to the point right away, which is good and not so good. A little more subtle is good. Really, really liked the ending. Too many stories on here don't end well.