All Comments on 'The Exchange Ch. 10'

Wonderful story so far, but I have to know, is this the end? Please say it isn't, I am so intrigued by the world you have created and want to see the story continue on, to hopefully include Inka becoming pregnant, information about Niti's sister and her experiences, etc.

Man this is a great story and you're a great writer. But could you dial back a little on the mindless glorification of inka? It's quite implausible that a princess would be tortured for killing a snake, it shows that it was an abrupt plot twist by the author to make the situation a tear jerker.

It was not. It was abrupt, and somewhat over the top, i had a hard time believing it.

Inka's background story, not plausible and i can't help but say in bad taste - it was just used for gloating or put her in a light that showed her as a pitiful victim.

Otherwise, it was a good fantasy with a good setting, and even though I'm not fond of costume porn, but i enjoyed it. It's because the writing was good.

The story was good, and good pacing, you are talented.

I only request that in future you try to make the sad situations a little more seamless with the story, and not fall in the 'glorification trap' like many authors do with their main characters.

Cheers and thank you for a good story.