All Comments on 'The Experiment Pt. 02'

by MrIllusion

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pcman1950pcman1950about 6 years ago
Superlative!

Finely crafted characters, provocative interplay, and a large dollop of gender-defining examination.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Secret Room

There isn't going to be a Pt. 03? It was an excellent read. 5 stars

After Heather's comment "Looking at me, Heather slowly smiled and said "We're going to have to talk about this my dear... I think that an evening in the room downstairs at my place, you know, the one you've been curious about, will cure you of this silly notion..."

This was eluding to another part to the experimenting, as Heather might expand things to some B&D play in a dungeon like setting later on. Not to mention innuendoes of some repeat performance(s) with the seductive Aoife before the next Ball.

SonofCalliciousSonofCalliciousabout 6 years ago
Well done.

No more is necessary. :-)

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