All Comments on 'The Exploits of Cockslut Kelly 01'

Just letting you know to be on the lookout as the next two chapters have already been approved and will post on Monday and Tuesday. Lots more cock, domination, submission, cum and devilish fun to be had and I'm not even to the weekend yet. The weekend, OH MY GOD, the weekend will be full of all sorts of debauchery, gang banging, toys, devices, spider gags, you name it. I'm so hard in my little baby blue panties right now in anticipation of you all reading them. ;)

oh my god what an amazing story , i was so excited all the way through it , i would love to be Kelly , please write more chapters soon ,i need more of this ,xx

The introduction to your story and the story itself is a refreshing note from a very promising time contributor.

moop. trans girl here. I can't even write a coherent sentence right now, as I'm still dumb from the afterglow. best part is I only got to the very beginning of the shower BJ. now I can keep reading this incredibly written story.

Fab first chapter, God I wish I was Kelly, being dominated by a hung top.

I can't wait for chapter 2!

The most beautiful story ever. Many nights of dreamy longing, bliss! To your perfect Master, and his loving lustfull dominance, and his submissive inspiration. ty xoxo I wish, where are these hot top men? Rolling my eys n pouting in the midwest.....muddypaw420@yahoo.com

That was hot, I can't wait to read more

Ridiculously hot. I'm not sure who I wanted to be more! Well done.

I love your story it's so good and well done. No errors and quite refreshing. Don't stop.

Oh my, that was a very hot story! More, please!

So fucking hot, I'm so glad I can keep reading this series and not have to wait for the next chapter

Damn! Hot!

What a hot story. Loved it. From the shower and back to the room and creating a monster master in just a short time, it was all good. Look forward to more.

You are a master of dirty talk. The situation was so erotic and the concept of peeling away layers to reveal the true nature of a shy nerd with an imperfect body into a self-confident dominant is perfect. So too the sub may learn more about his submissive nature and what he needs in a dominant. So many lesser gay/bi stories cast the dominant as a perfect physical specimen often devoid of caring when in reality, it has little to nothing to do with perfect looks. As your main character realizes, that's usually only good for one or a few relatively shallow encounters. Passion in Domination/submission is not the absence of caring, but about a deeper, more honest level of it. Maybe a certain obsession. It can be *because* of his average looks,piercing eyes, skinny or dad body and a cock of any size that triggers a sub's desire. But, I think it's really about the genuineness and obsessiveness of the Dom's desire and freedom to exert power and control over a particular person sexually, and subs' willingness and deep need to surrender to their true nature that frees both to flourish and experience passionate joy. It reflects maturity in your writing that the characters engage in such an honest and empathetic way. Well done for this chapter!

The hardness of my cock as I read this story only proves to me that in my heart of hearts, I am truly a cocksucking, submissive, sissy, cumslut!! I can't wait to read more!!!