All Comments on 'The Extended Family Ch. 10'

Keep up the good work.. I loved the entire series.. Thanks!

I am looking forward to reading more from this story-line.. Keep it going!

Tyranniex

This is one of the best stories on thie site, well written!

Keep on with it, don't end it here

Looking forward to the next holiday weekend kin the so filled with love and compassion household in Florida. Just wish I could participate! Fantastic!!!!

While impropable, at least in MY universe, this is a well written story. There MUST be more - PLEASE. Not only the Christmas/New year orgy, but perhaps how things progress. Maybe Bev gets a transfer, Mel and Robbie get married, etc. If nothing else, once you get past the next holidays, then some future goings on. THANKS again and regards. drmike

Please, don't stop at this point

As a Dickens of a kid named Oliver once said, "Please, Sir, may I have more?"

What else could you add? At about Chapter 6, I tired of the sameness of each episode, but carried on through to the end. There was far too much repetition. It could have been half the length and just as enjoyable.

another really great chapter. i love this series!!