All Comments on 'The Fall Pt. 01'

Nice, two of your stories on a rainy Sunday morning. :) Can't wait for part two of this one. Thanks.

how much of this is still just a concussed dream controlling his mind and if he is still out in the woods. Nicely done so far.

Please continue...like your writing style.

Keep it going but not with long breaks in between chapters.

Wow, love the subconscious approach to mind control. Very interesting. Well wrotten too.

I enjoyed this story as I have with most of your stuff. You have it titled as a chapter 01 so I hope you DON'T do as you have done with some of your other multi-chapter stories, fail to finish them. I use Storm Damage and Photo Studio as examples.

As I stated in the beginning, I enjoy you work but get frustrated with non-endings.

When and will there be more to this story? I'd like more of this story but my belief is that you are NOT going to finish it. Please don't just stop with it? Like you've done before! Thank you.

Now that we are here. we still need the Sexy cop to show up and check his Vital's. Then there is the Nurse's from the Hospital who could get his address from his File. Not to Mention all of the Other women he will come across. and he still has to figure out what is going on with him and Enjoy or Bemoan his Luck.

It's kind of frustrating to read chapter one of a great story and not be able to read any further.

Interesting twist on the premise of mind control. Well written and presented.

I agree about "Storm Damage". Excellent stories, so far, and the possibilities for more episodes were easy to see, but not followed up.

As for people being so impatient with "The Fall", takes time to write episodes, particularly if Life intervenes!

Poor guy needs to recover and the ladies won't let him rest

btw what happened to the Highway Patrol officer, did she come back while he was asleep and help herself?

Loved the story so far! Five stars and a point!

Well that was really good, I'm trying to figure out what happened to make him so irresistible to the women. I look for more clues in the next part.

Wonderful, well done I loved it. Thanks so much.

What an adventure 5/5

5 I have a headache too!