All Comments on 'The Family Room Ch. 03'

I've been reading at literotica for years and this story is one of the top 5 out of the thousands I have read. I have followed this story from the first chapter. The only thing I ask, please follow up with the next chapter soon.

To the first comment. Very loving and satisfying.

Sibling sex is the best!

Very excellent story and very good erotic and put more ch. 04. crh

Mused:

You have one great love story going. The fact that it's between brother and sister is relevent because there are social and moral considerations that interfere with the thought processes. Not having had any sisters I've always wondered how often, or not, love between siblings actually happens. So far you've done a great job of dealing with the problems and turned out a great love story. Thank You.

Ronnie W.

You have a great love story unfolding and again I loved it! So far you have handled the brother/sister love very well. Changing the story line by bringing back Erin (and perhaps Sam) at this point seems a good idea but watch out for fireworks!

I like the story, but there are far too many grammatical errors.

For one, "it's" means "it is" or "it has." Leave out the apostrophe to show possession.

I look forward to reading the rest soon.

but what about the clothes and pizza they left in "the family room"?

DKP

i like the 2 main characters. well done. and very sexy.

I love series like this, based on the developing love between the siblings and the start of their relationship, keep the amazing work up.

Hope she is on the pill, otherwise Daddy will be belting and booting young Rick and deservedly so.

Still a hot series.

I so want to give this a 5/5, but there's too many problems with it. The three weeks of silence from Julie is the biggest problem even if it didn't happen in this episode. It colors my point of view. I can't rationalize Julie not speaking with her brother to suddenly making love to him overnight and calling him 'baby'. That's similar to the behavior my ex wife had and she is a sociopath.