by RibaldWriter
...except for maybe the title. I like the characters, and look forward to seeing where you take them.
-Rei
Since I have a major fondness for chubby women, I want to see this story develop.
I love the way that you started this story off. Unlike many other stories about "Women of Substance", I hate using the word "fat" unless the woman enjoys hearing me use it, this one starts out slow and with respect. I like that and can't wait to see how you develop it further. But don't rush it. I will read it just how you explained how you wish it to go. SLOWLY! And I think that Patty will become a much more friendly partner to Lucy and Randy. LOL.
Keep going. This has the potential for a very nice little romance story