by Intrepid_Fate
one question for the author, will u be keeping this pace for releases? id love to read more soon
One of the very few Authors that has impressed me enough to take the time to right a comment for. I've read many stories on here, but very few actually catch my interest like this one has. Well done. I'm truly looking forward to more work from you. I do have to admit though that the last few chapters have felt kinda rushed.
Just realized who my mental image of Marcus looks like: Marcus from Gears of War!! Haha except with a lil gray in his beard and such
This is my Star Wars LMAO! I love the scifi and harem plot. The fact that you moved from high school to this is fantastic. I would hope you continue writing and even consider having this published. In my experience, this genre on Amazon is filled with so much drivel containing the most deplorable violence, characters always saying/doing the most absurd things to prolong the stories, or boring plots.
i have read both of your submissions on litorotica and was wondering if you would ever finish either of the stories...i really like the way you write,,and would like very much for the completions of the stories....thanx
He'll "endure" being called a bad guy? No, stupid! HE IS A BAD GUY! He is an evil dictator. Full stop. Jesus, are you really telling me that while you wrote him, you thought he was some hero?