All Comments on 'The Father of the Bride Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome

Love the Wedding Daddy/Daughter stories. please keep writing, i want to know what happens next. Like maybe when the couple are saying their vows, Gail and John secretly look at each other and only they know they are really making their vows to each other and then later they find time to consummate their secret marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great start

I love how this story is starting. I would recommend an editor go through it, though. Can't wait for the next entries!

Asmodeus32Asmodeus32about 7 years ago
keep going !!

great start and obviously a natural talent with erotic stories.

SamWarrensSamWarrensabout 7 years ago
More encounters

Please write abut their continuing encounters. How Daddy gets her pregnant , not her inadequate husband. Hubby finds out about them while they are in bed making their second child.

Hubby becomes a cuck and agonizes over it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Needs other chapters.

It feels incomplete.

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

To me, this is very real. After 16 years, my husband still does not know what I am doing on my time off.

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