All Comments on 'The Festival Ch. 02'

What about trying a new direction in your writing where the cheating wife realizes her mistake and wants to reconnect with her husband. But it is too late. What does she do now?

steviet:

Please keep writing and growing in Your craft.

Your plot was different. This is fiction and enjoyable.

Anonymous aholes: if you dont like it move along.

Quit trying to bully people.

Must be beta males.

Real men and Women dont talk or act so low class.

This is a great story and you are doing a great job! Keep this going for the whole trip home!

I just don't get a husband wanting his wife to fuck another man white or black, he cannot truly love her. What if she finishes up with a black baby?

The long road home (for the group) and her time as Jamar's girlfriend. It sure sounds like she is now addicted but it will take a serious plot twist for her to stay with Jamar afterwards. So, just allow us to enjoy the trip

Garbage as usual......

Fantastic story!!!!!!

I really liked both chapters of your story. I hope you will continue to write.

This one is so good too, one more chapter please!!!

Sure would like to see the next chapter.

Great stories, hopefully there is a next installment on the way soon

Just another stupid husband married,for a little while longer to an unfaithful cunt. Chapter 3 sees are pregnant with Jamal’s baby, and hubby flying back to Australia alone.

Wow. She said she doesn’t cheat on her man. But she already did that and is now doing it more. So if she adheres to being faithful to her man, being a chance she gets pregnant with her cheater date, she’d have to abort it when she returns. Given that she is totally devoted to one man at a time. Having another man’s baby cooking in her would go strictly against her code while she’s with her husband. And I wonder how she’ll feel hearing that her husband has been sleeping with his girlfriend and got her pregnant?