All Comments on 'The Fiancée and the Pendant'

Fascinating story. (The story belongs in Sci-Fi, but that doesn't change the writing.) Cleverly crafted, and thoroughly entertaining.

-- KK in Texas

I would have liked it even better if the pendent had enslaved both of them but nonethe less, it was hot!

The title isn't a big enough word, I was thoroughly and completely enthralled with this story ... thank you Sir

Perfect story,