All Comments on 'The Fifth Wheel'

Nice, Holly! Thanks.

I hope you continue wit this narrative, I have fallen in love with Beth and Matt!

Very well done!

Clearly Matt knew how to plan, implement, and control flow of goods, and services, in the gift shop , bar and bedroom. He is also pretty sharp on customer relations, doing a follow up to make sure his customer's requirements were met.

Enough of that silliness. Another tightly composed story from SSW. Crisp, realistic, erotic and staffed with plausible actions and characters. Bravo

Hawt, hawt, hawt!!! I need a Valentine's Day like that!

I liked it from start to finish

A great read in two pages.

Thank you for sharing this with us - and have a Happy Valentine's Day!

5* Jules

Yes it was hot hot hot!

I loved that it was written from the woman's point of view by a woman. It's much more real and gives us ignorant guys something to think about.

The narration flowed and I was swept along with the rising tempo and mood.

Super tale! Give us more!

R.

Of course we don't know for sure how Beth's friends fared, but based on the hotness of this story, it would take a lot to top this one.

Seems Beth was the luckiest of them all. Good luck in the Valentine's Day contest.