All Comments on 'The First Time I Noticed Ch. 02'

As long as both are adults I have no problem with incest romance (even same sex).

We have to have more - very HOT sex but now they have to plan on how to keep going when home and what do they do when they are at separate colleges ??? Maybe, he can transfer to her college and rent an apartment together ??? There has to be a way to get together and how do they top what they've started ?? Thanks !!

Please continue.

I really hope to read more soon.

horny2doit - The next chapter is coming soon, with loads more backstory. I promise this one won't take months. Really. :)

I liked the way you brought us along.

Great story

Still a good premise.

But sex still happens too fast. And there's too much sex in too short a time.

Three stars.

Well right about one thing, once you break the taboo of family fucking, you are on dangerous grounds. That was quite a description of their first intercourse, though I was surprised by the amount of time it took him to cum in her once they started. The first time my sister and I fucked we were so hot that we could hardly contain ourselves. So yes his length of time thrusting into her was a wee bit of time before he left his seed in her. And from your description of their fucking, they were wild to be fulfilled. I must admit though it sure sounded good and I want more of this steamy fantasy.

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Ah, sibling love how sweet it is. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

This could all be in one story with many pages. I guess it's how you wrote it tho. Originally it didn't come out at once and lots of time passed between. Did you know that insest is only kinda illegal in the case if it had to do with a minor or abuse? Adult non abusive consenting incest had never been illegal. Perceptions on life and thinking one way. Many states have many laws that make things illegal. In Michigan you are not allowed to leave a running car unattended. Thus electric starts and lowering your car warm up before work is illegal. Everyone still does it. In the Bible it instructs you to take your brother's wife if he does and to continue making a family with her. More kids. Adam and eve were incest. Adam and his daughters, eve and her sons, father Abraham and his many sons had many sons of father Abraham, Noah and his family had to repopulate the world. Pure blood lines in royal times. Thousands of instances you just look and and think hmm