All Comments on 'The Flake Taken'

Another hot well written story and this one, like your "Shooter" story feels like this one may also continue. No trickery with this one though. it's a straightforward Dom/sub situation perfectly done or perhaps I should say started if you plan on a sequel. You're a talented writer and while I don't always like your characters, which is in itself a tribute to your writing ability, I have enjoyed reading all of your stories.

Very nice indoctrination of a bottom like me to the world of submission and gay sex!

exactly as i need to surrender

I'm reading your stories with a butt plug up my ass, squirming with delight. Its so natural for a Beta male to be curious, but ever so hesitant and cute about sucking penis for the first time. Once he spews in you its game over. Bob head, chug cock and swallow sperm. He's turned you out, and you'll need more for the rest of your life. He's edifying you.