All Comments on 'The Florida Trip Pt. 02'

i'm loving this story as much as the baseball trip ... can't wait to see where you take it next!

The BB Trip was bery, bery good to me, but I felt unfulfilled by the ending so I'm glad you are revisiting the characters. Adding Alyssa to stir the pot sets up wicked delight to come. Looking forward to the resolution.

I'm feeling too many negative feelings so far. The baseball road trip was a happy story, even when issues arise. That's not the vibe so far in this story. Bring back the happy, adventurous spirit, please!

The descriptions of the All-Star are not quite right

Loving the story but I get the feeling that Alyssa is going to be trouble for everyone. Five stars and a favorite point!

You're about to be massively cucked... Chicken attack!?

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Who will be next?

I love the way you write. It’s not just bang bang sex sex smutty stuff, it’s like kinda poetic at times and feels like i’m reading a really hot steamy book which is absolutely awesome

You are an amazing writer. You write with a seemingly natural grace in a style that is impeccable and yet doesn't draw attention to itself. (You even know how to use "lie" versus "lay"!) In a way it's like the story you're telling is not worthy of skill. But then, didn't they say the same thing about Flaubert?

Wow!

It seems to me that Ben and Sarah should be together but Alyssa is going to be trouble, I feel she is very insincere. Like a match in a box of fireworks, it'll take just one rub.

Very well written.

oh fuck, I didn't expect Alyssa was such a slut, I can only expect that Ben and Kevin DP her