All Comments on 'The Foreign Exchange Student Pt. 01'

Your story needs proof read and more action!

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I really wish you had slowed down with the story and made it more of a tease. This story is in serious need of an editor. You also have the tendency of repeating phrases especially the one regarding a 40 year old heterosexual male and an 18 year old boy or something along those lines. I’d look into getting an editor as you’ve actually got a pretty decent story.

Nice start

I stayed hard all the way through this story and want to read more.