All Comments on 'The Game'

Rigid, not ridged

Moping, not mopping

Odor, not odder.

Great story.

They were supposedly playing Texas Hold 'Em, but then you said that Kelly discarded and drew new cards. There is no discard in Hold 'Em poker.

I liked those 30 second-rounds, they spiced up the game a lot :)

This story really made this girl horny. Loved it.

A very sexy story, well conceived and with good characters. Such a shame about the spelling and homophones. Properly proof-read this would have been worth 5 stars.

Poker rules, moisture not moister, he felt him slip, into the Sandi's arse, other girl buck and panted.

I think 5 stars is within reach with a good editor

A neat premise and an erotic situation, with the '30 second rule,' but next time, please find an editor as the many errors detract from the overall impact of the story. It's a '4 Star' but could have been a '5.' Looking forward to your next story.

I liked Kelly. And Sandi.