All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 01'

Wow! We love your voice: it sounds so genunine, so real. Your prose it quite engaging, and we felt the desire, the NEED, just plain COMPELLED to act our your described scenerio. (For this my husband offers you a great BIG THANKS!)

We'll have to read the rest of your stories now.

Thank you for sharing.

S & A

Wow - best erotica I've read... HOT and intelligent.

You mixed some of the emotional weight of relationships into an arousing little story.

This is the second story of yours that I have read and it was so hot. I gave it a high score and plan to read the rest of your stories

This is so good, you feel strongly for their relationship. the sex scenes are hot, hot, hot, and you leave hints of future adventures!

Thanks,

Is a fantastic story and a wonderful game. Sounds like a sexual match made in heaven. great job.

I guess it is a typical male fantasy but I loved the part where she asked him to cum on her.

I cum a lot myself and I love to shoot my cum all over my wife's face. I'm going to read all your stories and work on making a big load of hot cum in my balls. Then later when my wife sucks me I'm gonna give her a face full and it will be because of your stories.Thanks.

I lost the game

Love your stories