All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 06'
by MicheleNylons
- 10 Comments
MicheleNylonsover 5 years agoAuthorThis story is dedicated to the Black Mirror Netflix series; did you see the end coming? Let me know.
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SissyTaraover 5 years agoThis is a great series. It is interesting and well written as well being hot of course. Great job Michelle.
Anonymousover 5 years agoHi Michele
I really loved your work. The ending was great, I loved the twist.
Before Chapter 05, I thought that Marie is the Quizmaster. But with David/Petra confronting Timothy in Scotland and the hint, that a man was sitting in the Mondeo, I knew that I was wrong with Marie at the end of Chapter 05.
Keep up the good work!
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Anonymousover 5 years agoDefinitely didn’t see that scenario coming. Honestly thought you were headed to the “semi cliche” ending of William returning having just regained his memory all these years after the plane crash. Felt a bit sad for David not getting the medical help he desperately needs. Schizophrenia and Bipolar disorders are difficult on every member of the persons family, friends as well as individual struggling with the mental disorder. Overall still a very sexy and well written story.
crashmattover 5 years agoLoved it, of course i did, you wrote it! I love all your work.
And, no, I didn't see the end coming, I went through lots of ideas, but that wasn't among them!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoWell in all honesty I was leaning more to it actually being orchestrated by the wife, being a lawyer she looked into her husbands past and found out about Petra, giving her husband the chance to just come out and let everything become water under the bridge or give him the chance to become Petra and stay together so long as Petra only entertains men. Though this is so much more satisfying and as I already said it was completely unpredictable. I really enjoyed this series, i’m still curious to see if Marie is going to continue to fight to get her husband back or did she just roll over and accept that her husband is gone and Petra is all that is left.
vandavontiessenover 4 years agoI'm suspecting you're really a writer ;)
To well constructed, and the final is stunning.
Congratulations
Anonymousover 3 years agoThat was was a really interesting turn. I liked it lol
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Adventure_in_NV11 months agoOnly thing that comes to mind after reading the last chapter is...
"Dave's not here!"
"No way, man. It's Dave.. Open the door... I got the stuff.."
"Dave's Not Here!"
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