All Comments on 'The Game of Golf: The Aftermath'

Ruined because you do not care to PROOF-READ

Pretty funny. Good finish to your golfing story, but why would you give the cheating bitch anything? Just kidding.

Banal! The illiterati who like this drivel won't know what the word means anyway.

Words fail me, as they do you.

I enjoyed the basic story line. Unfortunately you need to find an editor or learn how to write. Several times you switched from first to third person in consecutive sentences and you would use the wrong word. For instance, if you can insert the word "also" you should use "too", not two. I gave you three stars for this effort. Clean up the mistakes and I would have given you four.

Thanks, I could laugh heartily and that is really worth something in these times!

1st chapter now makes sense but neither were funny or a story I liked.

Ahhhhhh, the freedom to take everything in life just as seriously as you want!

Not sure which is more amusing: the story, the epilogue or the serious attempts to critique them?

Anonny says "if you clean up the mistakes you'll have a good story", but if you clean up the mistakes it will become as boring as taking a dump. IT'S INTENDED TO HAVE MISTAKES, IDJIT.

Thanks for the healthy dose of fictitious reality.

you should've stopped while you were ahead

If an outhouse could transform into the written word...this story would be what it would turn into.

Even though it was apparently supposed to be full of misspellings, awful grammar, constant pov and character speech changes, even in mid -sentence it was still terrible.

Waiting for part 3

...the hell.

Yep. We can tell that you don't care.

Load of crap.

Told ya, you're up there with the best!!

You better get Carla one of those UNFU_K machines. That way, if she's knocked up, he'll know it's his...

This story is a mess. Unreadable, so I skimmed before I quit.

More crap.You don't wear a garter belt with thigh highs,they are hold ups.