by dragontatto
totally didn't expect the ending but that is what put it over the top for me. WWB
Despite the short length of your story, the character developement was great. This piece of writing was not degrading toward the people and something about this story was unexpected. Leighlilly
notice you live in iowa. i hope you have been fucked under a bridge in madison county. i should think this would be a must.
this story had everything i like. a hot couple,that are totally into each other.spicy, kink,explosive sex. and best of all HEA. please,please write more like this.i loved it.annay
This is one of my favourite short stories on Literotica. It is absolutely fantastic! The couple is hot, Hot, HOT! I love the BDSM element, and I hope you'll write another story like this one.
AMAZING!!!